Thursday, December 17, 2009
Wednesday, December 16, 2009
Self-Evaluation of Presentation
1) The content that I was trying to convey seemed to come across clearly.
2)The introduction was effective, I began my presentation with some back story so that the details would make sense. I had a distinct conclusion, although I did not restate my thesis.
3)The body section flowed smoothly and was present in chronological order.
4)The transitions were used effectively. I did not use the words "lesson" but "point".
5)I ended my presentation with quotation by saying that I would retry my activity, what I did not get across is that I would do it with my new lessons in mind.
6)My delivery was good, due to my lack of preparation I did not exactly have outstanding timing. It sounds like my volume was good and speed of speech was understandable. My gestures were descriptive and added good realism to the presentation.
7) Overall my weaknesses include lack of preparation/ lack of sleep. This in turn made my thought process slower, which created unnecessary pauses in speech and filler "um", "SO". My strengths included ability to address audience, and hold good posture and gestures throughout.
Rainbow-War
2)In the end, it was better for the three kingdoms to be together. They all got to experience new colors and cultures. All peoples showed visible signs of happiness which were not there previously.
3)Yes, There will always be problems it is something that is ingrained in the spirit. No solution solves all problems. It may be for land, color, food, overpopulation. In conflict theory there is absolutely no solution.
4) I think it could be said there is some correlation between the events in the video and what is currently going on in Afghanistan. We the US are infiltrating just cause we don't like whats going on. There is no greater purpose to war than fiscal gain.
5)The message of the video is don't just immediately just another culture, especially before you give it a go.
Discrimination
I discovered that people become very sensitive about discrimination when I was attending cottonwood high school. I had an American government class there was only one African American fella in there and he sat far across the room from me. One day when the teacher stepped out 3 guys that sat by him started spewing slurs out of their mouths. It made me sick. The poor kid up and left. I never saw him in class again or even school.

